ERASER : Visual novel
Summary:It's Summer 20xx. I was given an assignment for my "final project" to watch over Violanda Margaritifera, an ordinary 16-years old high school girl, who was participated on the clinical trials of some kind of new substance on development. It is said that the substance has an effect on erasing some specific parts of someone's memories...Instead of having a standard procedures which require her to stay on the isolated facility during the treatment, she was given a freedom to lead a normal everyday life and attend school like she usually did. As the consequences, I have to watch her on her school and disguise my appearance as high-school student too. However, that girl is more troublesome than she looks...and many things is not going smoothly as I planned...
Genre:Drama, Romance, Sci-fi
What's on this version:1. Animated main menu screen2. Customized GUI (almost) for all aspects3. Status screen to monitor your progress4. Hyperlink that brings you to the quick explanation about technical terms5. Tips for more in-depth explanation about technical terms you encountered during the game
Limitation on this version:1. This demo only 15-20 minutes long2. The script has not been corrected by the proofreader
Website:http://project-eraser.weebly.com/
VNDB Link:https://vndb.org/v15211
Prequel (can be read on Webtoon)Indonesia ver.: http://www.webtoons.com/id/challenge/e-r-a-s-e-r-b-e-f-o-r-e-p-r-o-j-e-c-t-/list?title_no=43983Eng ver.: http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/e-r-a-s-e-r-b-e-f-o-r-e-p-r-o-j-e-c-t-/list?title_no=46240
Category : Casual
Reviews (30)
The story is really interesting so far and the background pictures are beautiful. The two characters have cute designs, too. The only major issue I see is the grammar. While I was able to understand everything that was happening, I did have to read over some things more slowly. I see in the description that it has not been proofread, yet, so the grammar has not affected my rating of this app. I'm looking forward to the full version!
💖It was a good story, as you said it still needs proof reading. It is not really bad just some tenses, ect are off. So it is a bit choppy to read. I also look forward to a few more options. So far I only got to choice to take a bath or eat breakfast. I do like how it said that did not affect the outcome. Awesome that you respond to everyone's comments. I am running out of space on my Samsung Galaxy s5, so need to delete it for now. Please let me know when more comes out. I will buy it. Michelle
The story is fair, not amazing or anything off the chart but it's fairly intersting. It gives off a lot of mystery about the characters that's partially filled up but then the story cuts off short and suddenly. For a moment I thought the game crashed or there was a bug. There are a lot of grammar issues in the english version, and I've also recognized the areas in the VN from Note Fragments. If you need help proofing I can help.
A really awesome novel! Though, I think you could've at least put a "To Be Continued" at the end. I thought I broke the game or something, hahaha. Will be looking forward to the next one. Oh, and the grammar is a little off. That could use a little bit of tweaking too.
So far it's interesting, with mystery and fairly decent visuals. Would be nice to see more emotional range in faces (they always look kinda angry to me?) but otherwise good. Definitely interested in the final piece and once the proofreader's gotten to it the reading will be nice and fluid. Also like the options in the settings, nice amount of flexibility there. Will there be a chance to save in the full version?
Only at the beginning still but so far it's really interesting. As others have said there are some grammar issues but that's easily fixed. It's also a little annoying that I have to tap twice to move onto the next text but, I don't know, that could just be a glitch on my end. Overall good game!
I rated the game 1 star because the game crashed every time it loads so i haven't had a chance to play it yet. Fix your game
Will not load for me it crashes every time I try opening it. My phone is a galaxy J7 prime so it should work.
it's nice though ,it will left you hanging .I wonder if when can I read the next part of the story.but overall it's ok ☺
The app will not open. It does not force close, it just will not open. Every time I open it up, it just force closes. it will not allow me to send any information.
Amazing graphics. Totally mesmerizing. But needs work on characters facial expression. They look angry... also the music is cool. Hope the final version will be better in grammar and characters. Cheers ;)
I haven't played all of it only a little but I already like it. My only problem is it takes a few taps to get the sentences to actually show up and so it's to slow. That is my only problem at the moment.
As the others have pointed. I thought it was a novel which we could elect what the character does, like the first act: taking a bath or eating. Oh well, nice attempt!
I love it from what I've read so far you guy's have done a wonderful job on it and do you know when it you might finish it thanks i in joy reading both story's they were great
Soo~when will you guys ever had to update the episodes i mean how long.I didn't mean like it was terrible and all,i'm just saying the novel was good for visualing our minds y'know.The global itself are looking foward for the full version.Including me.
You really do need a proofreader, under the cover of poor grammar and writing I really do think there is a sound structure to this novel, too bad I can't access it
I don't know how long it's been in this beta form or even if it's still being updated but I really hope it is because I really enjoyed the short amount of time I played in this game.
I really like this visual novel. Although the characters art need to be improve but the background is so amazing. I hope this visual novel complete.
So i read really fast, and even if the text speed is on max it still takes too long to load the next sentence, other than that its nice
When I first played this, I didn't know it was in version 0.2. So when it stopped at that cliffhanger, I literally attacked my screen to see if I missed anything. I replayed the whole thing. Word for word. Really interesting concept.
Liking it so far but when will we have the full version Edit: the wait begins. Ps. I like that you made it in English most good VN here are in Japanese or Korean so thank you
Yo its me again I can't wait for the finished product I was just wonder how far you've gotten that's all if you respond that would be cool
but looking at the comments, it seems to be really worth reading. I also like the fact that the creator replies to comments about the game. Pretty awesome for the creator :)
Hoping the story will pick up and hoping that it will keep getting better. Great story, although a bit confusing at times. I'm sure that this novel will be great when completed! Great job!
I've totally noticed you ripped off assassin creed's background but I won't judge. I'd do it to it fits perfectly.
This was one of the best visual novels I have ever read! I can't wait until the full version comes out!
When will the full version come out? Not trying to be impatient or anything cause it musta took some hard work... by the way keep up the good work💖💖💖
The story is really intriguing , can't wait for the full version! I'm not trying to rush you, but where can I know any news or updates on the game?
Thought the game was broken but then read that there was only 10-15 mins worth. Nice storyline. Cant wait for finished product!! Keep it up!!
I've really been looking for good visual novels and even though this is only a demo,I have to say that it's really good and would like to read the entire thing if I can find it. You just need to fix some of the grammar and make it better with Ren'Py engine.I also heard that you need someone to proofread and I would be interested in doing so before you release the final version