Hometown Romance - Choose Your Own Story

Just finished the first chapter and all I gotta say is.... awful. The storyline does seem interesting but the grammar is really bad. Also the story gets interrupted every 30 seconds with a ad. And personally I feel that the person who wrote it doesn't speak a lot of English, because it was hard to understand at some points. I'm going to try and keep reading because the storyline does seem interesting but I'm most likely just going to delete it.

It's ok. As some have mentioned, the text is slow to appear and it becomes smaller if there is a long description. Sometimes sentences repeat themselves. Not sure if it's a glitch or the same sentence was typed twice. Lastly, I feel that there are a lot of ads that come up randomly as you are reading. It seems like it's just one story as well.

I love this game! it's so addicting... it draws you in so much that you can't put it down. I have my phone and tablet going with the stories doing different choices seeing how things turn out each way. its also fun to do if you are waiting for an appointment or just wanting to waist some time. I have always hated reading books as I'm a visual person as I do better that way, so this is something I'm enjoying. just need patience for the next part of the story

This game is good and all but I feel like there could be improvements upon the writing and the flow of the story. The writting is nice and easy to understand but it doent flow nicely if anyone understands what I am saying. It could just use some improvents on order and just the over all flow. It kinda flows like a ball on a bumpy field. (No clue if anyone will make sense of that). I also think the way you trancer between talking to people is a little wierd. I also find it wierd by the size of the characters on the screen, I have no clue why but I can't focus when the people are that big.

I really tried to stick with this game, but I couldn't do it. The dialogue and grammar is often terrible, the graphics laughable, and the transitions between different people speaking is jarring. I also don't like that you can't tap to speed the text along.

This app would be on my list of apps that like and dont like if I had one it would on the bottom of my apps that I dont like list...I have a rare eye disease witch means I cant see small things, the words in this app is very hard to read in the actual story unless it's where your character is and the words are bigger. At some points the words go by fast so that when you try to read it you either have to screenshot it or not read it all. I'd give this a 4 if these problems were fixed.

Waiting for a long time for new chapters then when they are finally added they are full of bugs and the story gets stuck in the middle of the scene. I really like the app and story but do not like waiting for new chapter's. waiting for new chapters for days and weeks ruins the story. other interactive stories I am reading are not like that if they are a chapter is is done within a day.

The game is fun and the episodes are interesting, but the cost of diamonds needed to purchase something is high so I suggest that it is lowered or the diamonds given may be a little higher so that I can purchase other things but besides that the game is super fun and amazing. I also have trouble opening episode 8 of season 3, everytime I try opening it, the app stops functioning and it shows me other apps, can this be fixed cause the suspense of not playing is killing me

The music was okay at first, but then it looped over and over again to the point where it was overwhelming and annoying. It was way too distracting and I couldn't even focus on the game. Yeah, I could play in silence, but I prefer different music playing in the background to make the story more...immersive. The artwork is pretty good, though.

Super boring! I have played many love story game, but this one is the most boring. I mean this story has no changes! She is all confused in her emotions and the whole story is revolving around her messy thoughts and the story is stuck in it and at last she has to chose one of them and The End. This can never be interesting...No new changes I was just waiting from the start for something interesting to happen but the story was finished and nothing happened at all. Please don't download this! 👎😡

i quite like how the story is taking turns with nail biting situations but you guys need to speed up the process of updating the story line. orelse players like me will get easily diverted to some other game and uninstall and find something else.just saying it you never know. and im writting this so that you guys can revert me back with a solution. apart from all that great work guys.loved it

It was a funny, childish love story. It was quite good. Besides all that, the game was a bit glitchy; freezing often, wasn't able to change outfits, same sentences were being repeated etc. Please look into these issues.

The grammar is horrendous, half of the time I can't make sense of what they are saying to each other. There are too many Ads, and sometimes after watching an Ad it skips scenes in the game. Could be better. Should be better for a 5 million downloaded game.

The game is good but the words shown in the box is so slow to write. It would be nice if you put like when you click all the words it would show in one time and not like it takes 2 or 3 min to show. That's all but your game is wonderfully awesome

It's good because it is easy to collect diamonds.. They'll give you 4 diamonds everytime you finish a chapter. Unlike other games that will give you only 1 diamond after finish reading a chapter. But there's a problem here.. They told me they will double the diamonds (which will be 8 in total) after i watch an ad.. But i've tried for few times, it still doesn"t work.. i still got 4 diamonds only.. Hope you can fix this. But overall, i like this game.. You guys should give it a try👍👍👍

The game seems nice but i can't make it past the first chapter because it keeps glitching!!! It is so annoying because whenever i go back in, i have to restart!!! Just a waste of time and data trying to play... you guys need to fix this game

I liked that you're able to progress in the story at your own pace... No 5 chapter tickets every so often, that it doesnt cost diamonds or gems to change into a different outfit and that the "premium" choices you choose you dont have to pay for, because they give you some after every chapter. I wish the paid items would transfer over to different stories though

The story line is alright... ALOT of misspelled works & incorrect use of alot of words. It takes a minute to understand exactly whats trying to be said. Not exactly sure how you earn gems in this one either, but just like all the other games, it cost ALOT of gems to choose the "premium" choice. If it wasn't for all that, I would of given a higher rate.

I think that it's a really good game. but there are spelling errors and errors of how the wording is. also you dont get to choose what your person say alot. but it's still incredibly fun!!

To be fair it's not a bad app but there is work that needs to be done. I don't mind the adverts too much but I don't like that it says to watch an advert for double diamonds and doesn't allow you to watch a video. I have noticed very early on that it took away some of my diamonds when I did not select a diamond answer. When the characters say names, sometimes the names are wrong. It will say one character is talking when it clearly should be the other.

Not good for androids or if I played this on my samsung loading screen pop up would say it was bad app. I only load up 4 paragraphs and add? I begin to wonder if going be like that whole way. Interactive fiction dialog read that loading screen glitches and kind makes people wonder if this game had low poly or 3d model map it might been better. You can click menu choose a story and renact it? But this might been older story app.

I cant finish my story it crashed on chapter 15 I was at the reveal and it kept on repating the same line over and over. I will give an extra star when its fixed on my end... *Update... I recomend this story game to anyone wanting a feel good read... Thank you for fixing the bug...

chapter 15 keeps messing up. every time right after I get into the chapter it keeps repeating itself over and over again and doesnt go any further. I restarted the chapter using 2 diamonds and it still does it. I would like to finish the chapter. please fix!

waaaaaay better than episode and other interactive games. the one thing that would be better is if you could have more options, i feel like im just reading sometimes. but overall, an amazing game!

I love this game..The storyline is perfect... It's amazing... The graphics and all are beautiful..... But the last chapter for me freezes and I'm unable to continue with the story... That's so frustrating because I love the game so much...

There are way to many adds and it sometimes repeats. When I am reading while the words are coming on I have to for the finish appearing. There are hardly any choices and so many words.