Memo - Visual Novel

The artwork is lovely, but that's about it when it comes to praise. The characters are all annoying, and the plotline is cliche and lacks believability. Maybe if Liz wasn't such an annoying brat and just confronted Seji about his apparent memory loss, then this whole story could go a lot smoother. There are so many amazing visual novels out there, so don't waste your time on this. It's honestly just too annoying to bear reading.

it so short, i hope you guys make a really long one. and the choices, its only few. its alot beter if many choices was happening.

I love it one of my favorite visual novels 😁😁😀😀 I definitely recommend this novel play and enjoy 10/10 👍👍👍 good job developer I love the story

I dislikednit, What h characters are extremely annoying and itsncleche fix it up a bit I love the Art tho

Some text was cut off in certain scenes

This is a grate game and there are 6 endings so I played for about a good 3 hours I love the game make another one

It's too short story , i want long story is better.

I think it was a good game

Adorable and lovely for its brief length; I grew attached to the characters and enjoyed the story considerably. However, there is one very large drawback: The VN appears almost completely unchanged from the PC version.The controls are tiny and ill suited for a smaller screen, difficult to press at times. During scenes with full-page text, the bottom lines are sometimes cut off.

Liz is freaking annoying, not even surprised that I got ending 5/6 on my first try. I don't like girls like that who think that beating around the bush is a good way to tell someone something. If you got something to say, say it, don't create unnecessary drama. All in all, I'm sure this is a great story

Nicely done visual novel! It really feels like a short version of Love Hina. There isn't much choices available as most of the dialogue is all set, but the few choices you make affect the outcome, which has 6 different endings. As many have said, the text can go beyond the bottom and gets lost but this is a very well made story!

In my opinion, it needs more improvement. Such as the text and the characters. Cut off texts from side to bottom. The protagonist is too dull when it comes to response and the story as well. The music buffers from time to time and some aren't looped nicely. Hope to see updates from this!

I was bored and I'm into visual novels and I don't pc/laptop so I thought I find some great visual novels and found this great visual novel which don't take large space. However I don't see all text on kind full page text screen (Idk what's that called). Also what engine was made on? If renpy than I kinda understand. Btw mine phone is samsung galaxy j1 if you don't phones.

I beat the game with less than an hour for the endings 3/6, 5/6, and 6/6 (endings 5/6 and 6/6 does stay the same as a bad end *spoiler alert*) but nonetheless it is a very great game and I am hoping to know if this one will have a sequel to it

It's a good game I really enjoy it but I didn't get the ending 3 then I discover after watching YouTube that there is a missing decision , fix it plz

Story ended very abruptly and seemed very unfinished in the storyline. A real shame as it was getting interesting. Just seems pointless to me putting out an unfinished story.

I loved this game. It could take you a good two hours to finish and has some great comedy in it. Although some lines are cut off, the game is more fun than ddlc in my opinion. Loved it 👌

Great game. I had 2 good ending and 1 bad ending when i played this game simulationly. Overall great games and you might wabt to change the game where the protagonis can make a lot choices and the effect had a lot leading toward the various ending. Well good games guys loved it.

It's good and I hope you make more of these novels. It makes me feel like I'm in the novel myself

Some text pieces are unseen, particularly dreams. I answered choices as nice, honest, and helpful, and got ending 6/6. The backstories for King 4-eyes' stalking, and black-hair's mom issues, are both lacking. Also, regarding Liz and a particular item at the end, a chapter two is highly necessary. Based on reviews, this VN has been out at least a year or so,... so get on with it and provide a continuation already!

I loved it , I'm not to judge mental on things because hey technical things are to shaddy but hey you got yourself a fan so if u need advice shout out I'll gladly help if I can :b ..I just wish there's an option to hit that one dude lol, but the story kinda makes the problem with the clicking thing worth it ... Well to me it us well cya in the next I guess

And also can you make a visual novel about a black haired girl and a cat

Wow. This was amazing. It's short, but it's a VERY rich story, with small details that become important. It never feels like the pace is bad, it's consistent as hell. It's just amazing, it's got me into visual novels as a whole. I recommend this to pretty much anyone.

Ending 4/6 At first I didn't get it since ending was very sudden, but I guess it that you got Liz

The visuals are well done and not overwhelming, the visuals have a beautiful and calming feel about them. The story is a little cliché, however it's great none the less. There is not alot of backstory on each of the characters however you do feel part of the story right of the bat. Thanks to some good writing and visuals. The only downside being it's just too short.

I did all endings including the true ending (if that is what it was?) 4 stars.. why? Your story is good ill say. But when a long message comes ,it cuts off.do better next time ok? 😊 And maybe im able to give 4 stars

Liz's character is not likable. Writing disappears off bottom of screen.

I love this game and really wish you would make a 2ND one to add onto the story because the game was kinda short.