Category : Adventure
Lame, choices offered were stupid. MC's fixed dialogue was random and all over the place. Stopped being interesting when the MC became an idiot flip flopping back and forth.
I would've loved it more if the ending was happier but I needed to accept that we couldn't change anything. It would be better if we could make a happy ending I just didn't understand why he needed to be bad...
ONG THE PLOT TWIST!!! This is AMAZING!! One of the best visual novels I have read!
Notengaging, its corney as all hell,not worth the effort to read,uninstalling.
Sad and best game .hope the next pt also come
The choice and story is trash
heart touching story
it was sad
I'm not going to spoil anything, but I was a bit confused at how both the characters other than the main character acted. The ending made it, and it all made sense. The ending also made me feel horrible 😢 But this was very well done, especially for the developer's first time. I think the music also captures the feel.
I love everything about the game, it was so cute too, I would definitely recommend it to my friends, but I didn't like the ending and it made me so sad that I cried a lot =, (. Can you at least add a good ending too, you can keep the bad ending, just also add a good ending too, please. Just think about it.
This visual novel is the sad story and it's pretty good. I didn't cry becoz the whole of this doesn't make sense. At the beginning, why he viewed them as human beings? Why changed them to pets in the end? Why twisted? If he and I knew that she's a dog, then it's much easier to ask his parents to adopt her since they bought the cat by the way. Or you can go other way around to find a good family to adopt her. Also he is really the dick and stupid. If I were him, I could do better to treat them nicely than acting like a dick.
The music is great and able to convey the emotions. The sprites is great. The story is ok.. too bad I already find out the plot twist at the middle of the story.. and the dialog feels a bit formal and unnatural? Like, you could change whenever Takao calls the little sister, into her name, because that'd feel more natural imo. Oh, and the choice when untangled Haruka, I don't think that's necessary because in the end you just.. untangled her XD. Hopefully you'll improve for your next vn!
At first, I thought the writing is weird, but the end really made me understand everything and look at the game differently. As short as it was, the game is one of my favourite visual novels, although there are some spelling mistakes here and there (and calling Mom and Dad "Mother and Father" was kinda non-natural to me too). I also have to say that I've never thought that game developers could be so friendly, but looking here it shows me otherwise! :D
OMG it was so sad a the end I was so sad and now I will never look at a dog the same way 😰😰. but it is a great app. When u make another one can u make one that has a happy ending.
I usually don't cry over visual novels or movies, or anything really, but it just got to me and I cried. I hated Takao 😂😁 he made me so mad, but the story was touching and beautifully done. Good job
Pros: -I love the story, especially that plot twist ending, it caught me off guard and everything just now made sense. -Graphical wise, it's also great, although some didn't quite matched up with the rest of the game's design, it was still great. Cons: -The game is slightly sluggish, but i'm not sure if it's the game's fault or it's my phone's fault -The font is slightly small to read and sometimes it overlaps in the text box -The text box is slightly also too high and the character sprites aren't showing fully, but it's my personal preference. -For some reason the music was quite low too; (again i'm not sure whether it's the game's fault or it's my phone's fault), since personally music gives a story a more feeling. also 4/5 would recommend to friends :D
This was so sad ;-; it was confused on why he would ignore a friend for life after fighting of the ball. But the end made it all make sense... I cried so much D:
I loved it. I feel like it being short really helped the game. The ending made me cry even though I did guess the twist. Overall great game and story but the Main Character was a jerk at times and the game was awkward every once in a while.
It was like a happy ending story at the beginning but actually I got shocked when they saw her died .I was really so disappointed and I was crying at the end . Really you guys have really done an excellent job.
The game started average, but slowly when down hill. The twist at the end is one of the most cheap twist ending I have ever seen. However the the art is good.
It was short but it was really sad. But I loved it. Actually crying rn. 😭
It was a bit confusing until the end, then i realized what it meant. Also the reason why i gave you 4 stars is bcuz graphics are not really good, but are good for your first one. Can't wait to see the next one!
It's too short and too sad you could have let us chose a good ending or a sad ending
Heart-breaking and sad story. Are u guys gonna make some more of these but longer? And maybe for over 13? Maybe im just askin too much. Srry
The art is great, the music is so so... The story? Bland. If you're going for simple, I guess you got that spot on, but there's nothing really great about it. I can't say anything else since I might spoil the story, but there's my thoughts.
OMG Its so sad... especially the last one wer dey showed it was actually a puppy... im literarry CRYING right now... Best VS EVER T.T
Well i found the pictures and the music nice i'm still confused about the ending... what was the message overall?Also why did he image them as humans(spoilers!) then animals?Overall okay yet confuseing
it was a good story it was very sad i mean the ending did not make sense it was like that thing in zombieland but the opposite(there was no zombies) but it was really good i highly recommend