Category : Casual
TLDR: it's a great VN that makes you look smart when you recommed it to people. And it's free. Honestly, this game's a trip. As a visual novel, the dialogue's witty without sounding pretentious, the music mostly complements the scene without becoming over-bearing, and the artwork's better than I'd expect from a free mobile game without gacha. Besides the lack of a log button (auto saves work to an extent), all my critiques would be nit-picks of story elements and personal taste.
Writer really has trouble writing endings, doesn't he? Characters in this game are awesome: they're are fun, lively and cool, and I truly was enjoying the game's story right until the very end, where it totally goes downstairs. I understand that writer wanted to be unique and write an unusual ending, but the follow-up to it seems rushed and obscure, leaving us without a clear explanation of the protagonist's actions. "More than one good ending"? No, only one, that leaves other options in dust.
Absolutely beautiful storytelling, easily one of the best VN's I've ever had the pleasure of experiencing. Your given amazing character development, a simultaneously gorgeous and heartbreaking storyline, and lovable characters that are near impossible to forget, not to mention the music. The themes presented are very thought-provoking and relatable, although they are heavy, and could be a bit much for some. Nevertheless, I would recommend this to anyone in need of an amazing and intriguing read.
Spicy little VN. Nice twists, good characters, however there is one image I've yet to unlock, the one where the MC is on the rooftop with Claire. Maybe the DEVs can give me some insight? Great VN overall, the psychological themes were explored well, though I did skip quite a bit as I tend to realize when the events presented are important to the story and when they aren't. Good job.
It just didn't hook me. Perhaps it is someone else's cup of tea. The implementation seems to be well done. The story just doesn't seem to be going anywhere. In fiction, it is important to hook the reader within the first few minutes. After reading for 20 minutes, there wasn't anything to get invested in. The writing style seemed a bit unsure. It had an air of sophistication, but little of the cohesion/correctness to back that up. It is like a homework assignment from a foreign university student
It was so good that it finally got me to write a review for something on the appstore. This game is beautiful, it's art, it's music, it's story and characters. The story was beautifully written, and included themes that really got me thinking. Oh god and the music, the game wouldn't be as good as it is without it. One song in particular "In a Sentimental Mood", everytime I listened to it, there was just this tightness in my chest, it got me so emotional. Read this VN, you won't regret it at all.
When I first started reading, I knew that it was gonna be good. And honestly, I still cant tell which one's better, the music? Or the story? When I reached the ending though...pretty unexpected, took me by surprise. I am soo glad this is free, but either way, this game would've definitely been worth the money if it wasn't. I can understand if some people don't like the complex words and deeper meanings, but hey, this story holds a special place in my heart from now on.
I honestly love visual novels and this is one of the greatest I've ever read. The story had everything you wanted. It had comedy, sorrow, joy, passion, and most importantly character development. I've read over 30 visual novels in my life and almost all of the ones I disliked had bad character development. I feel as a writer you should make your characters develop and grow as people. doing this brings life to your story and makes it easier for other to relate to. so enjoy fellow readers.
One of the best visual novels that I have read till date, especially considering that its free to play. It has well-balanced themes, diverse characters and a fairly gripping plot.
I'm absolutely blown away by the amount and quality of the thought-provoking themes present in this game, I don't think I've ever come across any game like this before. Some of the themes explored, though universal, really resonated with me and helped me gain perspectives on life that I had never thought of before, and for that I'm truly grateful. The entire story is extremely well written with a lot of care put into every word. The characters are very nuanced, and I loved the art and music.
Absolutely wonderful. If I could give it more than 5 stars I would. I found so much of it very touching, and it was impossible not to fall in love with Claire. There were hysterically funny moments that had me laughing to the point of tears, and depth of the insight into human experience that taps directly into the enigmas that we all, as people, must struggle with. It was an amazing ride. Thank you for this.
To be honest, I have a lot of doubts when it comes to reader apps because the authors usually rush through the books they write so as to start a new project so you see a lot of inadequacies in their novels especially lengthy ones, but this app on the other hand surpassed my expectations as it was updated a long time ago. It is one of my best free reader apps on Play store next to Delight Games
Best story game ever. It simply is, it often mentions a lot of complex subjects that hits me on a personal level. I often forget that I've just been reading for 5 hours because I get too immersed in the story. Can't wait to find out how it ends!
Absolutely beautiful and brilliant, this story legitimately changed my life in a way and made me realize so much, i highly recommend playing this, you won't regret it, the soundtrack is also perfect, everything about this visual novel is perfect
A visual novel with a great story, the occational non cliche twist, and solid art. Not a "choose your own adventure" sort of visual novel, but very entertaining if you like to read. 5 stars!
OTL is definitely one of the best free VNs I've read in a long time. Lots of humor and storytelling all wrapped up into a short 8-10 hour read. Highly recommend. (Also the soundtrack is free on Steam along with the game)
not just simply cheap written stories , author have some unique way to write the story and its amazing and the dedication the writer did definetly show up , endings and plots sure surprising in a unique way of twist that let our jaw drop sometimes , worth the 5 star and the time.
I've read the pc version of this novel some years ago and I'm installing it in my phone to read it again. The writing is very well done. The fact that it is a free to play novel is mind boggling. If I could give this a 10 stars I would
This game is probably tied for the best mobile visual novel I've played together with Sepia Tears. The story is amazing and only made better by its good graphics and great music. Highly recommend.
CANNOT BELIEVE THIS IS HERE! Played this game on Steam, and fell in love with it so hard I even began translating it to Portuguese. It's incredibly amazing, and left me completely shook! You should play it, if you haven't yet!
Loved it. The plot twist was so good. This was very sad if you read it and truly understand the meanings of the conversations they were having. The lies were all over the place. I hope to read this type of things in the future!
sharp, smart and fun! characters are easily distinguishable and endearing! background music is also on point!
For a free game, it was very well done! Plot was intense enough and quite mind convoluting actually! Certainly was food for thought. However, it can be a little dry/heavy if it were to be completed in one seating so I suggest reading it bit by bit. Also, it's basically a novel but with pictures and music so don't expect to "play" anything.