Past Mistakes - Living a Book
- Reading time: 40
- 90 minutes --
- Only 17+
This is an interactive book with multiple endings. "Living a Book" is a new approach of interactive books where the reader’s decisions change and trigger new situations and a different ending.
Inspector Collins, an ageing agent of the New Total Order to which the whole world is subject, finds, by accident, a time capsule buried in the 21st century. In the capsule he finds the origin and solution to the totalitarian state in which the whole of society lives in the 25th century: various plans detailing how to build a time machine, and the story of the tyrant who began World War III, allowing him to create the Great Dictatorship in which Collins lives.
LIVING A BOOKEnhancing you reading experience
Ordinary people, book lovers and writers from around the world are writing our books. Be part of this adventure and become the author of your own interactive book. You just need to write the story and Living a Book will design, program and publish it as an application at no cost.
www.livingabook.com
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Not is a gamebook, not is a game, not is only a book, is a DECIDEBOOK.
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Reviews (29)
The bad grammar in the story distracted me, so I was unable to be drawn into the story. commas were in places where they were not needed, and I noticed run-on sentences. The order in which the words are placed could be better, and there were some paragraphs I couldn't easily tell which character was being talked about. This story was obviously worked very hard on, but I suggest the author has a third party check for grammar mistakes.
1.Paywall.Not free. 2. Writing is seemingly rushes to the next plot point, so the transition is not really smooth.
I think it's amazing. It has a creative story, you can make choices, and it has some rich lore. Obviously they worked hard.
I dont want to rate it with 1 star because I haven't used the app but my only problem is that I cant open it...
I hate rating this poorly, but I can't even open the game. I'm dissatisfied to say the least.
cant open the app.
Rare, you dont get such stuff in bulk on Pl.Store at all.
pretty cool..2 thumbs up!!
Same as other commenters. Cannot open.
Story is good. Pace is good. But one thing is, the script seems forced at times. Also, it can be made more free flowing. Eg, you don't have to switch the name of the agent from mathews to doughlas each paragraph. You don't have to put two many idioms, proverbs, sayings in a single chapter. Especially when they are small. You don't have to forcefully add the surrounding description as an afterthought to better get a feel of the surrounding. Thanks, Hope you keep on writing
I loved the game! I wish the story was longer though. I did see a lot of correlation of the future depicted and what certain groups are trying to turn the world into now. Its clearly a communistic society set up much like modern North Korea in the way the Great Father is regarded anyway, only as a one world government. Its really frightening.
I really hate to be the guy who gives one star for bugs, but I downloaded this game over a month ago with the hopes of playing it because it looks REALLY good. I haven't gotten a response or a reply or anything since then though, and the game crashes before it even opens. I want to rate this higher, but please fix this issue. I don't doubt this is a quality game.
Excellent story nice graphics. But Freezes up and it is a very short story. Would have liked it to be much longer.
The story was good, could have been excellent if you played around with the time lines and time loop. The game played perfectly.
It's ok, it's predictable it has too much exposition for such a short story. And the character that is your partner is bland and it just acts as a flower pot. Endings are, again, predictable and dull.
Awesome. The storyline was great, very few grammar and spelling errors, and nicely written. Spoiler alert: The only problem was that the time travel thing will create many paradoxes. But if that is ignored, then this game was perfect.
Excellent short story game. Very well crafted. Needs a better English version though. Some context mistakes and stuff need correcting.
A bit short. The ending was kind of sudden. But a fun read, nonetheless
I wanted Collins to sleep with Alice the 7 days time machine was building, and story is totally incomplete.
Very very engaging storyline, awesome work guys...it would be cool if we get to download all the stories in a single app than downloading them separately.hope u fix it☺
Same problem as a number of others have mentioned. App crashes immediately when trying to open it. The game looks good, unfortunately I can't play it.
I almost feel asleep reading this,boring story,hard to know who the hell is speaking on the text,and the writers mixes fascism with feudalism.Good if you need an hard nap.
It's a nice story love how it's been played very well. Hope there will be more
This game is awesome and so addictive I can't stop playing
The game doesn't even open on android 8.
I really enjoyed it. It's a pretty short game, but it's ACTUALLY free, and a good story, so, I am not going to complain.
This game is amazing.It always has something new and exciting That's why I like it
Couldn't even open the app
Would have given it three stars, but since it was free, got 4. The story was ok, I came back to it every now and then, but it's too short and barely scratches the problems of time travel, which has been discussed for more than 100 years thoroughly. I wished it didn't give me an easy ending and rather hit me with confusion along side the main character. But I enjoy the platform and wish it well!