Unnatural

The grammatical errors and lack of imagination in the writing can be overlooked for me, I truly enjoyed the story and pace, and lots of diverse characters.

The story I found fun, but the writing needs work, as do some of the systems. It has potential nonetheless, I feel it could be a great text adventure if it got some editing, as well as a save feature for the second season, if the author still plans to continue. I feel it also needs more characterization, the characters can be quite bland at some points.

Honestly, Unnatural has some potential but wasn't done properly. At certain points the story feels rushed, short and doesn't stay consistent. Even with that-, I'm making this review for one purpose. Unnatural has a game breaking bug! During the 'Tooth and claw'(I hope, I remembered the name correctly!) quest, if you let Marcus(the park ranger who is your guide) die! You are stuck repeating the same options over and over. "Check ammo box in the tent" or "Go search for Marcus."

This has a good story with good length to it. A lot a interaction with the story at my points not just during critical points in the story. Many different outcomes for the ending make this games replay value pretty high. One issue I found was a lot of mispellings or incorrect words or terrible grammer making it a choir to figure out part of the story around them. Overall it was good just needs a spell check.

Conceptually this is a neat game. Unfortunately the writing style is extremely amateurish and the grammar is atrocious, and I'm not even a stickler about that stuff. That coupled with the wattpad fanfiction level of writing ability and a healthy dose of extremely rushed plot, EXTREMELY barebones dialogue and bland characters led me to uninstall before I was done, I couldn't take it anymore.

The writer had a great concept with awesome ideas but it was executed very poorly. The writing is rather bland and uninteresting. Some scenes are writed pretty bad making it became less immersive. Characters introduced could use more descriptive details instead of vague characteristics. Writing and grammar aside the storyline and whole plot is quite interesting though.The supernatural themes used are very well constructed with various details introduced. Next time just make it more descriptive

Had a decent story line and it had a good extent of gameplay with the free ppl,but it still gave late loopholes to make it kinda tedious. Like there's no character development options with the bully/old friend,nor there's much bkstory about the sparring partner other than their name, appearance,and fighting style. Maybe it'd b easier to know if the whole thing was available,or something else was added for the story than cliche.

Conversations are awkward, the grammar is abysmal and the story keeps missing opportunities to be interesting and explain scenes in proper detail. I finally gave up on this story when the author insisted that running at 4 mph would be an intense workout.

I really did want to enjoy this, but after purchasing it, I regretted it. There's plenty of potential, but I just feel like it never carried through. I don't really know what any character looks like and relationships are flat. The lack of good transitions between passages of time took me out of the story too. Everything felt too abrupt and I couldn't bring myself to care enough to finish. I do apologize to the author if this feels too harsh. It's not my intention.

Lots of potential but very poorly executed. It's cliche, there's no character development, and the plot is very rushed and not immersive at all. Definitely not worth the purchase but I still had some fun reading the free version. If only the author actually cared.

It lies to you. I went into the research team and learned that they had developed a hybrid bullet. My first mission with Gamma I choose tooth and claw and take the hybrid bullets. I shoot the first werewolf and it said I need silver to kill a wolf and die. I then start again picking silver bullets and kill the werewolf but my next option is to shoot ether red or gray wolf. I shoot gray and it doesn't have any effect. Why make a mission almost needing the hybrid bullet if it doesn't work.

Interesting story. It has a lot of bad grammar which is a real turnoff when you keep reading it over and over. You don't say, "try and run," you say "try to run". Also, learn when to say "Tom and me" versus "Tom and I." Bad writing ruins an otherwise good game.

Don't buy it. The quality deteriorates within 2 chapters. The scenes lack details. Most characters' appearances aren't described at all. The dialogue is short, unrealistic and childish. Getting to know people feels like conducting an interview, their responses lack personality, self-interest and intelligence. Love amounts to smiling at someone. Choices are just for show. I've probably written more coherent fanficks than this mess. Just read an actual fantasy book or some free online novel.

Loved the story and overall this is up in my top 3's. The only problem I ever really had was there writing. Sometimes it didn't fully make sense but other then that it was great. Though just a question if the devs read this, when will season two come out and will I have to pay for it too?

I love this game. It introduced me to the genre and has kept me hooked since. I have played through it to the point of memorization. I told the story of one of my playthroughs to my younger sibling as a bed time story. This is an amazing read and well worth the cost.

Of all games of this type I've played this one has been one of the better ones, imo of course, and kept me actively engaged. Typos and errors here and there but it was easy to wrap my head around what you were aiming for. Great game! Season 2 soon PLEASE!

Sloppy. Mixes up pronouns and events. Stats are inaccurate. Somehow - no love interest. As if the preview chapters were written with effort, and everything else was added as an afterthought. Do not buy.

It's a good game and it has huge potential. Really love the concept and I'll be lying if I don't have fun. The character are okay I guess not great like COG games but serviceable and it's just kinda lost it's mark a little bit

Not very character building I dont feel much for any character, the story is predictable, and it's riddled with spelling errors. That being said, its a semi-entertaining read so it isnt total trash.

Sam Kabell? I SALUTE YOU! The characters have their own personalities that when u choose the same choice but with a different character, the results are never the same thats what makes it more entertaining and really engaging cause u have to pay attention to each characters personality before u choose some options to get the result u wanted. The "code after the game and use it for more advantage if u play the story again" is GENIUS.Pls make make more stories like these

Overall, not bad) However, it's impossible to get to one of Julie's books, so you locked out of one achievement. In first chapter, after school exam, it just skips choice that supposed to be here.

Started out interesting, but the game bugged out and I had to uninstall and restart. Afterwards progress started to become more dull. Had great potential, and I hate leaving negative reviews, but this one sadly wasn't it.

I found this an amazing immersive story. I felt my emotions rise and fall with the character. I fell in love with certain characters and felt a bit of a rage with others. It felt like I truly was there in the story.

Not bad. But not good either. It didn't have a save system, so how can we load our character if a sequel comes out? The choices were nice and the story was good, but it could have been better.

I actually really like this game...i make a lot of progress...when i close the app to open yt for a guide...all of my progress gone and i kinda frustrated..

Awsome! I have done a few other similar choice games, bur this is by far the best. Out of all of them, this one is the most derserving of a sequel!

There's a bug where soul boost can't go past 15% and more than a few grammatical errors so i can't really give it more than 3 stars.

Why post the game as free on the app store if your gonna charge us after we install wish i could rate lower but app store says no and some ppl will say, but it says in app purchases but with some of their other titles like life of a mercenary that just gives you the option of turning off adds.